Thursday, July 5, 2018
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I liked the way you described the battle bus.
ReplyDeleteDid you know I like fortnite too.
Next time, you could add more full stops..
Why did you do write about fortnite?
helo harry i like what you have done i play
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This is amazing because of the words you have used in this story.
ReplyDeleteDid you know I like Fortnite Battle Royale too?
Next time, you could do a part 2 about getting the victory royale.
This is amazing because I like your story.
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Next time, you could add some more detail to it.
Why did you choose to write about Fortnite?
Thank you guys I will next time add all the feedback that you said to do I love fortnite too hopefully they will add some more cool stuff. I also chose too write about fortnite because I l love the game.
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